Cut and Paste
Submitted by ana on Thu, 04/14/2011 - 10:00am.
narrow escape.
but escape, nonetheless.
tired, always.
feigning life -
silently wondering if the answers
have always been
packaged in air tight bags;
waiting to be opened.
and then I realize my mistake,
And hold my breath a little longer.
...
this is great.
:)
thanks, you.
loved it
Great poem. Thanks.
David Allen
Chesterfield, Indiana
:)
thanks!!
Oh Damn!
Hello! That was and incredible fast paced poem for me that grabbed me and refused to let go even after the last line. Very(insert expletive here)well done! This one will stick with me for sometime to come.
well
thank you very much.
feel free to expletive all you want!! ha ha