Dazzlin Her
Submitted by ana on Tue, 05/20/2008 - 9:14pm.
In finding what we need to find
in clouds
and water,
earth and sky
we see what isn't there, through trees.
The mind that tricks
with coloured leaves
We see the earth between
the suns
and moon
and rain
and littered love;
that floats
between the pain we never seem to
reconcile
before the night
becomes
the day.
~Ana Cortez 5/20/08
excellent
I don't know what it is about this poem that I find so appealing, but you've made the sun/moon/rain imagery fresh and meaningful - particularly concerning the reflective content. very nice poem ana.
Thank you
I meant to upload a photograph of mine with it? But I couldn't get it to work.
http://imageanalogy.my-expressions.com/archives/6150_1226824543/293472
So that's the photo.
I wrote this as I posted it.... just blurting it out.
Sometimes it just happens that way.
nice.
reflections in a pond?
Indeed. A pond.
Indeed. A pond.