alterations
Submitted by frost42_24 on Mon, 07/14/2003 - 2:17am.
revisions have never produced
the best quality of my thought
I like that it doesn't always sound right
or that not everyone will get it
I don't mind that someone thinks
a different word might have said it better
I am cozy in the rough draft
that skirts across the floors
and chills me in winter
reworking something changes it
camouflaging my intent
clarity often resides amidst the chaos
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