contemplation
Submitted by frost42_24 on Thu, 09/25/2008 - 4:46am.
I squinted my eyes
and held the
whole night sky
in the palm
of my hand
and the vastness of it
seemed so relative
with every star
resting in my finger tips
it is in moments like these
that I long for you
the most
maybe but two periods in? or
maybe but two periods in? or break into three stanzas? good, though.
hmmm
I'll think on that. I def. see your point. thanks
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Very interesting .... I felt
Very interesting .... I felt the say way about the ocean.
Again nice work...
definitely
definitely interesting, but i want more.
thanks
thanks, Dragon.
Softserve, what more do you want?