SC vacation haiku
Submitted by HipJan on Mon, 10/29/2007 - 9:27am.
had to remove these, sorry, so I can submit the edited versions of them to a particular place. (more and more pubs these days don't want to look at poetry that you've posted to blogs, websites, etc., sometimes even workshop forums.) :(
c. JLD, oct. 2007.
three very good haiku. my
three very good haiku. my favorite was the middle one, but really all three of them are good. good job.
thanks, softserve, glad you
thanks, softserve, glad you liked them.
p.s. as is often the case after posting, I made a couple of little edits.
you've really brought the
you've really brought the essence of the place.
thanks ana. i'm afraid i
thanks ana.
i'm afraid i need to remove these, though. but thanks, all, for the comments; they were helpful.