Marionette

Submitted by kerouac on Thu, 05/12/2011 - 2:46am.

Now that you have
My soul
Hanging from your hand
A tattered marionette

I can only
Swing & sway
A mimicry of this
Lovers dance

Will you ever
Tire of this
Moment

Like a child loses
Interest in an old toy
I can't help
But wonder

Will I ever be
More

Submitted by ana on Sat, 05/14/2011 - 9:55am.

you need to stop this. seriously. so fucking good.

dang.

in other words, don't stop

Submitted by kerouac on Mon, 05/16/2011 - 9:39am.

Thanks Ana! I really appreciate the comment.

Submitted by ana on Mon, 05/16/2011 - 5:29pm.

even though I used a bad word??

Submitted by kerouac on Tue, 05/17/2011 - 2:00pm.

Ana, you're too funny! I grew up with a 22yr veteran Sailor there is nothing you can say that I haven't heard or said myself! I guarantee it.

Submitted by ana on Wed, 05/18/2011 - 2:54pm.

I don't swear much (you can ask kpaul)
I feel it's more effective if used only when needed.
for fucks sake.
:)

Submitted by kerouac on Wed, 05/18/2011 - 3:08pm.

Too Funny!

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