Too Close
Submitted by kerouac on Wed, 05/18/2011 - 3:15am.
Will you wash away
My guilt
A subtle caress
From out of the shadows
To restrain the daemons
That float in and out of
A troubled soul like
Darkened storm clouds
Searching for a place
To relinquish the horrors
They carry
Will I stain my
Hands
With the warmth of
Your blood
Flowing soft as velvet
In the wind
From the innocent heart
That I've destroyed
Simply because you
Got too close
question
when you write, are you typing in Word?
I ask because all your lines are capitalized, and I wondered if that was your intent, or if Word just told you to do it that way.
I ask, because with the Capitals there, the lines seem all like "first" words at each line..and breaks it up oddly.
question
No its actually a style thing I have done forever no real reason just how I have always done it. I appreciate the feeback though. As it makes me aware of things I was unaware of and haven't heard before. Thanks again. By the way, I really look forward to reading when you comment and write your poetry as well. Thanks for sharing.
well...
i have a shit load of really good old stuff.
feel free to read any of that. it's just sitting there.
pretend it's new!!
well...
I will do so at some point this week when I can make time.