slow down
Submitted by kpaul.mallasch on Mon, 03/22/2010 - 8:09pm.
slow down
watch the
roses grow
even slower
time manip-
ulation, undue
undulations, or
so called ripples
in time. there - it
just moved ever
so slightly - rose
petals unfolding
to reveal the
secret of a
universe
wrapped
in patience.
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effective line breaks, the
effective line breaks, the unfolding of meaning, word-play, sentiment and semantics - all of this and more makes this a very beautiful, meaningful poem kpaul. nice job.
thanks
thanks
Thanks
i love how this one closes. Just thought I would drop by and say hi. Looks like you guys are keeping things going.Thanks Kpaul for your dedication to keeping the peoples website going.Thank you for providing a place for free expression of word art in all forms. ;)