notes
Submitted by kpaul.mallasch on Thu, 09/23/2010 - 2:06am.
he stood at the crossroads of diverging timelines
he sometimes forgot he was in charge of his life -
that he was a king
tiny moments
small movements
muffled memories of the
boy who never talks or smiles
period not as in stop but as a progression,
successfully traversing, a period of transition.
comma - slight pause,
build up for the rest
of the sentence
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too many commas in life.
but always. progression.
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