That feeling
Submitted by kpaul.mallasch on Thu, 10/25/2007 - 5:53pm.
Like playing chess
w/Scrabble pieces...
or whistling words
from distant seasons
like listening with
just one ear...or
Seeing something out of
the corner of your eye;
not in focus, it slips away.
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hmm, very different, but I
hmm, very different, but I kind of like this. :)
thank you
the first verse has been with me for a while now. rereading, i wonder if it's meant as a title for a book - collection of poetry and not a poem in itself. that is, not sure if i like the rest after the first two lines...
thanks, though, and welcome back...
-kpaul
Different style for you!
I liked it, sir!
Seems to be quite a bit different than your normal modus operandi. Not thematically, but structually.
I'm used to seeing you engage in wordplay and the sounds words make when combined. They remind me of jazz music. There's form and structure, but a lot of freedom.
Anyway, I enjoyed this one. I feel aligned with the voice in this poem quite often.
--- Mike
love this
it is short. it is direct. it is good.
yeah
i tend to go on and on and on sometimes. occasionally, though, a small gem like this will pop out...
thanks.