Sunlight
Submitted by Mr AOR on Wed, 10/31/2007 - 9:11pm.
She submits in sunlight
Pliant skin and cellular heat
Moist kisses
Leaving temporary landmarks
Flecks of sweat collect
among the soft hairs
of her body
The moments just before contact
are sweetest
An involuntary flinch
A whisper of a gasp echoing
through the canyons
of our combined bodies
Heat rises and spills over her
She is a flower in sunlight
Hi there. The subject matter
Hi there. The subject matter in this one might be more geared to men than women. But well done.
impressive. i knew by the
impressive. i knew by the first stanza i was going to like it, and then you broke it down so simple with the 4th stanza, and in the 5th you create alot of space w/ the echoes and canyons to go w/ the heat suggested by all the sweat and light. good job.