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Singing loon at midnight

Submitted by no_exit on Sun, 07/27/2008 - 9:36pm.

Beneath a crescent moon, the cool breeze
stirs smoke from the embers of a dying fire --
Through the night, he sits quietly beside the fire's glow
watching stars disappear, swallowed
by the same black cloud that swallows moons

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i like

Submitted by kpaul.mallasch on Sun, 07/27/2008 - 9:45pm.

i like it. almost want more of it...

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thanks

Submitted by no_exit on Mon, 07/28/2008 - 12:26pm.

thanks

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I'll second that

Submitted by frost42_24 on Wed, 09/24/2008 - 9:04pm.

short but very sweet.

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